Can someone check my grammer and sentence,please also can i apply for account manager with this experience? ty

just as the above has stated those error's are the only real ones i saw. Now for experience you will have enough. As long as a person has the appropriate licences to deal with the accounts that the position will be overviewing you should be good. Remember there biggest thing they wanna see is your personality. If you are kind and prompt that will give you a edge. Your job will be to remind the clients why your agency is better then down the road by using your customer service experience. When you get experience in the account manager position maybe you could look at doing my type of job. I am a personal lines Account Executive once you know your job it is alot more fun to deal with new clients everyday and i find it alot more rewarding. Good luck you seem to have the credentials now go woah them with personality to. You will do great.